First Rough Cut

Problems

• The film is already too long (8.20) and there are still many scenes to be filmed

• Needs to re-film clip of pictures of Charlie and Emma at the beginning

• Too dark and pink – not chick-flick colours

• Beginning too slow – lack of movement

• Some shots are out of focused

• Sound of camera squeaking

Solutions

• Re-edit the script and cut down irrelevant scenes

• Re-film

• High-key lighting

• More movement in characters

• Eliminate shakiness