First Draft: Script

The following is the first draft of my script.

Notes

• Script may be too long

• Focus is too much on Emma instead of Charlie

• Needs more post-modernism

• Research 'screwball comedy' – 'Friends' as an example

• No swear words

• Keep in mind that each flashback is potential confusion for the audience – minimise these

• Instead of Emma and Charlie both imagining their time with the guys, it should just be Charlie

• Must have some hints throughout to build up the final 'reveal' in the end